«¯§ Þ Ô.ö k¬»: haiku

Sunday, April 15, 2007

haiku

a major form of Japanese verse, written in 17 syllables divided into 3 lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables, and employing highly evocative allusions and comparisons, often on the subject of nature or one of the seasons.


hmmz.. im sure there are probably heaps more rules but lets give them a try...(ignores the subject of nature and seasons lol)

.....

You should forgive him,
though I know he stole your heart,
fight the emotion.

Last blossom to fall
always clinging onto past
Don't want to let go

Time is up grow up
Torn between the two worlds
Stay true or give in?
It taunts you in sleep
Every moment of the day
Distractions just stay
Strange vibes filter through
the reality kicks in
must embrace your fear

lallala.. okayyyy 0.o.. this could actually go on forever =/ but yer.. lalal.. fragmented notes...it's probably free verse instead lol =P

*am being kicked off the comptuer*

maybe i will finish it another day.


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